Sabbath study, xv: Genesis 1 translation, additionally improvised
Tense variants fine-tuned + etymological roots corresponded better + seventh-day sabbath better-emphasized.
1 In [the] beginning, create [did] God selfsame the heaven and selfsame the land. 2 And the land came to exist! formless and void, and darkness [was] upon [the] face [of] abyss; 3 and [the] Spirit [of] God fluttered upon [the] face [of] the water. 4 And said God, ‘Come to exist! light,’ and comes to exist! light. 5 And saw God selfsame the light, indeed! good, and divided God between the light and between the darkness. 6 And proclaimed God towards light, ‘Day,’ and towards darkness proclaims, ‘Night.’ 7 And comes to exist! evening, and comes to exist! morning: day one. [setumah] 8 And said God, ‘Come to exist! expanse in [the] midst [of] the water, and come to exist! divide between water toward water.’ 9 And made God selfsame the expanse, and divided between the water which [was] from beneath towards expanse and between the water which [was] from upon towards expanse. 10 And comes to exist! verity! 11 And proclaimed God towards expanse, ‘Heaven.’ 12 And comes to exist! evening, and comes to exist! morning: day second. [setumah] 13 And said God, ‘Collectified [shall be] the water from beneath the heaven unto [a] standingplace [of] one! and seen [shall be] the dry ground.’ 14 And comes to exist! verity! 15 And proclaimed God towards dry ground, ‘Land,’ and towards [the] collectification [of] the water proclaims, ‘Seas.’ 16 And saw God, indeed! good. 17 And said God, ‘Sproutify the land sproutage! herbage seedifying seed, tree [of] fruit making fruit toward species whose seed [is] in upon the land.’ 18 And comes to exist! verity! 19 And forthgone the land sproutage, herbage seedifying seed toward species, and tree making fruit whose seed [is] in toward species. 20 And saw God, indeed! good. 21 And comes to exist! evening, and comes to exist! morning: day third. [setumah] 22 And said God, ‘Come to exist! luminaries in [the] expanse [of] the heaven toward dividing between the day and between the night, and come to pass! toward mark, and toward appointed seasons, and toward days and years, and come to pass! toward assenting in [the] expanse [of] the heaven toward illuminating upon the land.’ 23 And comes to exist! verity! 24 And made God selfsame two [of] the luminaries [of] the great: selfsame the luminary [of] the greater towards dominating the day, and selfsame the luminary [of] the smaller towards dominating the night, and selfsame the stars, and set selfsame God in [the] expanse [of] the heaven toward illuminating upon the land, and toward ruling in day and in night, and toward dividing between the light and between the darkness. 25 And saw God, indeed! good. 26 And comes to exist! evening, and comes to exist! morning: day fourth. [setumah] 27 And said God, ‘Teemified [shall be] the water [of] teemage, soul [of] existing-life, and bird flying upon the land upon [the] face [of the] expanse [of] the heaven!’ 28 And created God selfsame the sea-dragons [of] the great, and selfsame all soul [of] the existing-life [of] the creeping which teemifies the water toward species, and selfsame all bird winged toward species. 29 And saw God, indeed! good. 30 And blessed selfsame God toward saying, ‘Fructify and multiply, and upfill selfsame the water in seas! and the bird [shall be] multiplied in land.’ 31 And comes to exist! evening, and comes to exist! morning: day fifth. [setumah] 32 And said God, ‘Forthgone [shall be] the land soul [of] existing-life toward species! cattle and creeper and life [of] land toward species.’ 33 And comes to exist! verity! 34 And made God selfsame life [of] the land toward species, and selfsame the cattle toward species, and selfsame all creeper [of] the ground toward species. 35 And saw God, indeed! good. 36 And said God, ‘Make man in [the] image [of] Us according to [the] likeness [of] Us! 37 and subjugated [shall be] in [of] fish the sea, and in bird [of] the heaven, and in cattle, and in all the land, and in all the creeper [of] the creeping upon the land.’ 38 And made God selfsame the man in [the] image [of] Him; 39 in [the] image [of] God creates selfsame him! male and female creates selfsame. 40 And blessed selfsame God, and said toward them [did] God, ‘Fructify and multiply, and upfill selfsame the land! and subdue, and subjugate, in fish [of] the sea, and in bird [of] the heaven, and in all existing-life [of] the creeping upon the land.’ 41 And said God, ‘Behold! set toward you [are] selfsame all herbage seedifying seed which [is] upon [the] face all the land, and selfsame all the tree which in fruit [of] tree seedifies seed toward you shall come to exist! toward food. 42 And toward all life [of] the land, and toward all bird [of] the heaven, and toward all creeping upon the land which in soul [is] existing-life, selfsame all green herbage [shall be] toward food.’ 43 And comes to exist! verity! 44 And saw God selfsame all which [He did] make, and behold! good abundantly. 45 And comes to exist! evening, and comes to exist! morning: day the sixth. [setumah] 46 And completed [are] the heaven and the land, and all host! and completed God in day the seventh [the] workmanship [of] His which [He did] make, 47 and sabbatized in day the seventh from all [the] workmanship [of] His which [He did] make. 48 And blessed God selfsame day the seventh! and sanctified selfsame [did] He. 49 Indeed! in He [is] sabbatizing from all [the] workmanship [of] His whose creating God toward [did] make. [petuchah]